Poems about water
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Poems about water
This is a new thread for any water poems. ^-^
Here's mine:
Not once, but twice
I fail to flee,
To set my boat
And sail the seas.
[By: Pure]
It's not very good, but it rhymes!!
(that's the important part )
Hmm..
Here's mine:
Not once, but twice
I fail to flee,
To set my boat
And sail the seas.
[By: Pure]
It's not very good, but it rhymes!!
(that's the important part )
Hmm..
Pure- Pidgeon
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Registration date : 2008-04-02
Re: Poems about water
i think it's good...Pure wrote:This is a new thread for any water poems. ^-^
Here's mine:
Not once, but twice
I fail to flee,
To set my boat
And sail the seas.
[By: Pure]
It's not very good, but it rhymes!!
(that's the important part )
Hmm..
catchy!
Re: Poems about water
Yeah, I know...my longer poems aren't really...as "rhyming"..so, yeah... =/
I made a kind of longer one about mutant apples (for a Social Studies project).
I'll post it some other time. ^-^ (I'm feeling a bit lazy right now)
I made a kind of longer one about mutant apples (for a Social Studies project).
I'll post it some other time. ^-^ (I'm feeling a bit lazy right now)
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Re: Poems about water
apples?Pure wrote:Yeah, I know...my longer poems aren't really...as "rhyming"..so, yeah... =/
I made a kind of longer one about mutant apples (for a Social Studies project).
I'll post it some other time. ^-^ (I'm feeling a bit lazy right now)
hahahaha
Re: Poems about water
I've been away from the forums for a while.. xD
(school just started again *rolls eyes*)
I guess now would be a good time to post my poem. =P
I am a mutant apple,
From the sweet orchard trees.
I fell through the air
On to the ground beyond the seas.
Alas! The bucket broke my fall,
Filled to the rim with medicine balls.
I drank the magic and filled my tummy
Even although the food was not yummy.
I survived this trial; alive and well,
So now I am a true apple,
As everyone can tell.
By: Pure
I call it "The Mutant Apple Pledge".
For our S.S. project, I wanted to use mutant apples as our army.
Plus, I wanted to make our teacher smile, and thus
(in language arts class, 5th period), this poem was born.
(school just started again *rolls eyes*)
I guess now would be a good time to post my poem. =P
I am a mutant apple,
From the sweet orchard trees.
I fell through the air
On to the ground beyond the seas.
Alas! The bucket broke my fall,
Filled to the rim with medicine balls.
I drank the magic and filled my tummy
Even although the food was not yummy.
I survived this trial; alive and well,
So now I am a true apple,
As everyone can tell.
By: Pure
I call it "The Mutant Apple Pledge".
For our S.S. project, I wanted to use mutant apples as our army.
Plus, I wanted to make our teacher smile, and thus
(in language arts class, 5th period), this poem was born.
Pure- Pidgeon
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Number of posts : 122
Registration date : 2008-04-02
Re: Poems about water
hahahahaha that's funnyPure wrote:I've been away from the forums for a while.. xD
(school just started again *rolls eyes*)
I guess now would be a good time to post my poem. =P
I am a mutant apple,
From the sweet orchard trees.
I fell through the air
On to the ground beyond the seas.
Alas! The bucket broke my fall,
Filled to the rim with medicine balls.
I drank the magic and filled my tummy
Even although the food was not yummy.
I survived this trial; alive and well,
So now I am a true apple,
As everyone can tell.
By: Pure
I call it "The Mutant Apple Pledge".
For our S.S. project, I wanted to use mutant apples as our army.
Plus, I wanted to make our teacher smile, and thus
(in language arts class, 5th period), this poem was born.
love it
Re: Poems about water
I'm glad you think it's amusing... xD
Pure- Pidgeon
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Mutant Apples???
why did you pick apples. of all the fruits or vegitables or anything you could have picked? Why...apples??????
Re: Poems about water
Ah, well.. that's because I had already drew a half-page + a few more apple warriors in different stances and holding a variety of weapons.
The poem was just an extra touch to make my S.S. teacher laugh. x]
The poem was just an extra touch to make my S.S. teacher laugh. x]
Pure- Pidgeon
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Re: Poems about water
Hmm, nah, I watched quite a bunch of episodes of Death Note, but it has nothing to do with it. ^^
Just complete randomness. ^^
Nice avatar, btw. =]
Just complete randomness. ^^
Nice avatar, btw. =]
Pure- Pidgeon
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Re: Poems about water
yeah. it kinda was complete randomness. i like being random. it makes life more interesting. lol.
but they stopped showing Death Note. it doesnt come on at all on my TV at all.
oh well, im buying the whole series on DVD w/ bday $$$. anyways....
i still dont understand why you picked apples instead of like... grapefruit or something.
but they stopped showing Death Note. it doesnt come on at all on my TV at all.
oh well, im buying the whole series on DVD w/ bday $$$. anyways....
i still dont understand why you picked apples instead of like... grapefruit or something.
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